Good lead, bad headline

First, the lead:
The world's first face transplant recipient is using her new lips to take up smoking again, which doctors fear could interfere with her healing and raise the risk of tissue rejection.
|Detroit Free Press, Thursday, January 19, 10A|

The actual headline: Her new lips are used to smoke again

Suggested headline: New lips, old habits

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